发一篇原创的英语文章，讲自己是英语的落跑新娘，被德语GG拐走了~~~~~
English and ITo some extend, it is now really difficult for me to describe the relationship between English and me. Friend? At first sight I’ve made my mind to make friends with it—and I made it. Lovers? We were! Gone are the days when we stayed with each other for at least six hours a day and stuck to the so-called saying” we won’t be apart until we die ”.Couple? I thought we would be—after all ,we had received so much congratulation—but the fact was ,I was a “Runaway Bride ” .
A poor runaway bride ,running away with German.
But! I swear, that it is the last thing I want to see. I used to have a steady faith that I could balance the amount of time spent on English and German, that mastering two and even more than three foreign languages during the study in the universityfor me was a piece of cake, that it would be a fantastic experience to indulge in the world of languages and that…
Stop! Recollections kill people.
And the facts. About a week ago I looked up madly the use of the passive voice of English in a book called English Grammar. I think I will really mad, if the basic knowledge of English are continuing flying away. Forgetting is my bitter enemy. But the bitterest one is myself.
I just want to go back to my English. I want to be better. And I do think I have got the ability to realize it. What I need is time. So wait me, my English!
献丑了，欢迎大家拍砖哦$送花$ $汗$
It is the same by me! 原帖由 life-movie 于 2008-7-14 13:10 发表 http://www.dolc.de/forum/images/common/back.gif
It is the same by me!
$握手$ $握手$ $送花$ english was, is and will always be my first lover
i am quite loyal$害羞$ 原帖由 nightdream 于 2008-7-14 22:06 发表 http://www.dolc.de/forum/images/common/back.gif
english was, is and will always be my first lover
i am quite loyal$害羞$
$高$ $高$ $kiss$ 原帖由 Aquaspirit 于 2008-7-15 12:55 发表 http://www.dolc.de/forum/images/common/back.gif
英文最难的就是写作, 要达到母语感觉真是不容易的.
是啊，深有同感$m7$ $m7$ 第三个单词，extent Friend? At first sight I’ve made my mind to make friends with it-- with him (if you were the bride, and he was suppose to be bride. then please write him instead of it.)
much congratulation-->many congratulations
I will really mad-->I will really be mad
I could balance the amount of time spent on English and German--> I could find the best balance between English and German.
So wait me--> wait for me 原帖由 wenyuan123 于 2008-7-26 15:56 发表 http://www.dolc.de/forum/images/common/back.gif
第三个单词，extent
$kiss$ $kiss$ 原帖由 neuron 于 2008-7-26 16:13 发表 http://www.dolc.de/forum/images/common/back.gif
Friend? At first sight I’ve made my mind to make friends with it-- with him (if you were the bride, and he was suppose to be bride. then please write him instead of it.)
much congratulation-->many c ...
太赞了！！！谢谢neuron亲啊！！！ 大鞠躬一个$m15$ $m15$ 只看了第一段，提几点小建议：
Couple? I thought we would be—after all ,we had received so much congratulation—but the fact was ,I was a “Runaway Bride”
couple 要改成 A couple， couple 是可数名词，单数形式要带冠词。同理，之前的"friend" 改成“friends”才好。
“we had received so much congratulation”这句不是很懂，lz想表达什么
“but the fact was ,I was a “Runaway Bride””这句里的was应该用is 和am, 因为你现在是这个状态。
“we won’t be apart until we die ”until 改成unless更合适, apart 做副词应用为apart from each other, 如果lz一定想用形容词，用separated 更地道。否则你这句话的表达too chinese english ^_^ I think I will really mad, if the basic knowledge of English are continuing flying away.
应该是 go mad, 后面我会用slipping away.
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