发一篇原创的英语文章，讲自己是英语的落跑新娘，被德语GG拐走了~~~~~

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       English and I
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To some extend, it is now really difficult for me to describe the relationship between English and me. Friend? At first sight I’ve made my mind to make friends with it—and I made it. Lovers? We were! Gone are the days when we stayed with each other for at least six hours a day and stuck to the so-called saying” we won’t be apart until we die ”.Couple? I thought we would be—after all ,we had received so much congratulation—but the fact was ,I was a “Runaway Bride ” .
A poor runaway bride ,running away with German.
But! I swear, that it is the last thing I want to see. I used to have a steady faith that I could balance the amount of time spent on English and German, that mastering two and even more than three foreign languages during the study in the university  for me was a piece of cake, that it would be a fantastic experience to indulge in the world of languages and that…
Stop! Recollections kill people.
0 M6 q/ t5 ~8 f( |; QAnd the facts. About a week ago I looked up madly the use of the passive voice of English in a book called English Grammar. I think I will really mad, if the basic knowledge of English are continuing flying away. Forgetting is my bitter enemy. But the bitterest one is myself.
I just want to go back to my English. I want to be better. And I do think I have got the ability to realize it. What I need is time. So wait me, my English!
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献丑了，欢迎大家拍砖哦  $送花$ $汗$
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life-movie

It is the same by me!

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原帖由 life-movie 于 2008-7-14 13:10 发表
It is the same by me!

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$握手$ $握手$ $送花$

nightdream

english was, is and will always be my first lover
i am quite loyal$害羞$

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原帖由 nightdream 于 2008-7-14 22:06 发表
, g! e9 q3 Q' @& Q8 ^4 \english was, is and will always be my first lover
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原帖由 Aquaspirit 于 2008-7-15 12:55 发表
. s+ B0 G- ^9 w" y; C, e英文最难的就是写作, 要达到母语感觉真是不容易的.

是啊，深有同感$m7$ $m7$

wenyuan123

第三个单词，extent

neuron

Friend? At first sight I’ve made my mind to make friends with it-- with him (if you were the bride, and he was suppose to be bride. then please write him instead of it.)
much congratulation-->many congratulations
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I could balance the amount of time spent on English and German--> I could find the best balance between English and German.
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原帖由 wenyuan123 于 2008-7-26 15:56 发表
第三个单词，extent

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原帖由 neuron 于 2008-7-26 16:13 发表
0 {% q+ [$ g$ m/ [" |/ ^Friend? At first sight I’ve made my mind to make friends with it-- with him (if you were the bride, and he was suppose to be bride. then please write him instead of it.)
2 m$ ]- R5 g! s9 E% n$ |much congratulation-->many c ...

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+ T3 t5 a3 w! b* @! z# q太赞了！！！谢谢neuron亲啊！！！ 大鞠躬一个$m15$ $m15$

莆萝菲

只看了第一段，提几点小建议：
Couple? I thought we would be—after all ,we had received so much congratulation—but the fact was ,I was a “Runaway Bride”
, x9 E/ o/ S+ {2 v) Ucouple 要改成 A couple， couple 是可数名词，单数形式要带冠词。同理，之前的"friend" 改成“friends”才好。
3 P4 c" |! V5 {8 W# X) V2 i) e“we had received so much congratulation”这句不是很懂，lz想表达什么
“but the fact was ,I was a “Runaway Bride””这句里的was应该用is 和am, 因为你现在是这个状态。
“we won’t be apart until we die ”until 改成unless更合适, apart 做副词应用为apart from each other, 如果lz一定想用形容词，用separated 更地道。否则你这句话的表达too chinese english ^_^

一梦二十年

I think I will really mad, if the basic knowledge of English are continuing flying away.
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应该是 go mad,   后面我会用  slipping away.