本人英语现在超烂，但脸皮够厚，问题简单大家多担待啊

monofo

下面的句子怎么说好：
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在我刚到德国的那段日子。。。

面粉团团

(return) back to the days when i first arrived in Germany.
3 y& g7 `$ H. S" t7 dPick up the memory when i first in germany.

我不是笨猫

During the first period I was here in Germany

monofo

多谢啦

havaianas

During the period when I just arrived in Germany

我不是笨猫

During the period when I just arrived in Germany
havaianas 发表于 2009-7-6 23:31

这句话有语病哦。during 是表示一个长期的动作，而arrive表示的是一个动作，不能连着用，至少我学语法的时候是这样的，当然也不排除现在现代英语有些变化

dearjj

during the time i just arrived in germany

Trois

(in) the days when i first arrived in Germany
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Hoard

In the first a couple of days that I was in Germany

cobra44

During my first days in Germany....

shuyamm2009

learnEnglish

"In those days when I had arrived in Germany."
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learnEnglish

"In those days when I had just arrived in Germany."
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michaellord110

Back to the days when I've just been in Germany.
9 K) z9 ^6 j: m8 k# V: ?& A# _2 @In those days after I had just arrived in Germany.

learnEnglish

Back to the days when I've just been in Germany.
6 x7 b3 P, I3 o3 {- c3 GIn those days after I had just arrived in Germany.
michaellord110 发表于 2009-8-2 16:55

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