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jack99

这是我写的一篇看图说话的作业，请帮我改改错误好吗，先谢谢你们了！
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, i3 E- W$ G0 U8 ?$ p: ADaisy is getting up at 6.30h.
And she sees her cat first.
She goes to thestation by car.
At 8.06h she gets on the train London Waterloo.
In the train Daisy reads the newsletter.
; ]5 e/ c7 x4 n. F7 \8 A# [1 tShe is at the staton London Waterloo at 9.05h.
" O' w) C5 C1 f2 i, JAnd a friend waits for Daisy.
/ e3 \/ C$ T4 xAsk eats in a china resteron.
" P. E/ U5 q; NThen ask shopps.
At 7.30h goes Daisy to house.

foxtail_lb

开始几句写的还明白，咋越到后头越不明白啥意思了呢。。。试着改改：

8 J& p/ B4 f! e6 G. c$ hDaisy GETS up at 6.30h.
She sees her cat first.
. T; u$ k: ^2 h, jThen, she goes to the station by car.
7 a0 ~0 |  R, C/ ^: EAt 8.06h she gets on the train to London Waterloo.
# [8 i6 U' @8 BIn the train Daisy reads newspaper.
She arrives at London Waterloo at 9.05h.
There a friend was waiting for her.
Ask eats in a china resteron.(这句话啥意思啊。。。)
+ o8 L' q7 k, m# }4 vThen ask shopps. （这句话也不懂。。。。）
" `/ f" P1 ~- r; v3 T+ MAt 7.30h goes Daisy to house. （我把这句话翻译成德文，理解为 At 7：30 Daisy goes home.）

itsfun

Ask eats in a china resteron.
7 g" T2 i  ~4 J5 T! N/ p; {. Z4 }Then ask shopps.
+ L- d7 h0 }, A8 i6 c. }0 wAt 7.30h goes Daisy to house.

最后几句也搞不清。试试。
The friend and Daisy ate in a Chinese restaurant.
( g7 i- R8 u  \; x0 E5 L! g. m$ KThen they went shopping.
  G) {2 M% B) nAt 7.30 Daisy went home.

jack99

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Ask eats in a china resteron.
7 I( T/ y6 m/ l: rThen ask shopps.
At 7.30h goes Daisy to house.
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最后几句也搞不清。 ...
8 M4 O4 `- @/ ]# pitsfun 发表于 2010-5-11 09:44

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    Danke schoen!

jack99

开始几句写的还明白，咋越到后头越不明白啥意思了呢。。。试着改改：
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* m9 X# {6 [7 T  d6 z7 u( g& O/ XDaisy GETS up at 6.30h.
( [, k! \  }1 ~9 @+ d( K4 `She see ...
8 v% h/ |) t( J, kfoxtail_lb 发表于 2010-5-10 19:12

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! @2 X5 \8 w* s; _    Danke schoen!