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jack99

这是我写的一篇看图说话的作业，请帮我改改错误好吗，先谢谢你们了！

  p8 O" Y# C( M0 F: I) m6 ]Daisy is getting up at 6.30h.
And she sees her cat first.
She goes to thestation by car.
At 8.06h she gets on the train London Waterloo.
6 l9 V; e# V; N' L4 |; `1 j0 U1 U$ j. JIn the train Daisy reads the newsletter.
She is at the staton London Waterloo at 9.05h.
7 N1 p' y% P+ V$ rAnd a friend waits for Daisy.
" O+ f1 E0 E2 p* b8 `9 i7 uAsk eats in a china resteron.
Then ask shopps.
At 7.30h goes Daisy to house.

foxtail_lb

开始几句写的还明白，咋越到后头越不明白啥意思了呢。。。试着改改：
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* p5 I0 p( M% r% ]; f6 M9 `9 a& ?Daisy GETS up at 6.30h.
+ d; W: p5 ^9 R" U, sShe sees her cat first.
Then, she goes to the station by car.
At 8.06h she gets on the train to London Waterloo.
8 {8 D5 T. d- A2 UIn the train Daisy reads newspaper.
She arrives at London Waterloo at 9.05h.
There a friend was waiting for her.
! X: s. m0 q0 i8 ?Ask eats in a china resteron.(这句话啥意思啊。。。)
Then ask shopps. （这句话也不懂。。。。）
At 7.30h goes Daisy to house. （我把这句话翻译成德文，理解为 At 7：30 Daisy goes home.）

itsfun

Ask eats in a china resteron.
$ c% s+ _: U6 G, y' [0 C$ OThen ask shopps.
  f/ J2 d/ g! r- r' ]4 i* C/ gAt 7.30h goes Daisy to house.
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( w# J" R: V( r6 _( U' k; I$ r最后几句也搞不清。试试。
The friend and Daisy ate in a Chinese restaurant.
3 F# O+ _" {: pThen they went shopping.
At 7.30 Daisy went home.

jack99

Ask eats in a china resteron.
$ z& L  \7 e  u' G0 r5 NThen ask shopps.
At 7.30h goes Daisy to house.
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最后几句也搞不清。 ...
itsfun 发表于 2010-5-11 09:44

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    Danke schoen!

jack99

开始几句写的还明白，咋越到后头越不明白啥意思了呢。。。试着改改：
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Daisy GETS up at 6.30h.
She see ...
foxtail_lb 发表于 2010-5-10 19:12

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    Danke schoen!