哥哥姐姐，你们可不可以帮我？

jack99

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请帮我找出错误，谢谢你们！
! `1 Q+ w+ T: U" tDear Jay,
$ N% H6 D: k* o) N& A# eThe dress rehearsal for our Sping Show was great!
All the children were very nervous.
) ^& ~9 y/ [5 ^) z- \" b9 ~I am not on the show,but lam in the Computer Clab and we designed the programmes.
  k7 _, y) i! k, xThe children practsed every day after school.
8 w6 {+ G' l/ c! b2 `% |: rThen,at Tuesday,5th May,the dress rehearsal stadet at 4o clock.
% q3 [0 W) ?' D( o4 D( U# xJo was one of the pirated.
# P. ^& |$ h( |Then on his left.
1 {7 L; R# l! bJack was very good in the band.
We all listed to the music and watched the scenes of different musicals.
After the end of the rehesalwe were all very happy.
& B5 o$ g' p9 U! @) z; E6 @$ IWe are ready for the show tomorrow.
% k$ I- B2 ]6 c0 t% YDo you habe shows in your school in New York?
Tell me about them.
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Love, Jack

jack99

哥哥姐姐们，我主要想看红色粗体的词用的对不对。

kiro

Dear Jay,
The rehearsal dress  for our Sping Show was great!
$ c; p) U* @' ~3 CAll the children were very nervous.
- b/ R3 O9 J) t" {; m" pI was not at the show, but lam(?) in the Computer Clab(?) and we designed the programs.
8 g$ }' s. k# X' _The children practiced every day after school.
  j" r( Q+ u$ ]/ y3 h6 j) C" R2 ~Then, on Tuesday,5th May, the dress rehearsal started at 4 o'clock.
. U- H! Y3 r9 }7 YJo was one of the pirated(?).
/ N/ I+ t5 Y! m4 hThen on his left.(?)
$ X2 M% N( l/ }7 `Jack was very good in the band.
We all listened to the music and watched the scenes of different musicals.
7 K) f: O% P$ a! cAt the end of the rehesal, we were all very happy.
$ H" D5 x% r. OWe are ready for the show tomorrow.
Do you have shows at your school in New York?
Tell me about them.

Love, Jack

大脸MM

British English, I assume?
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( S" s8 [& h& r7 NDear Jay,
1 R5 Q5 |1 W8 t* J6 {The dress rehearsal for our Sping Show was great!
All the children were very nervous.
I am not on the show, but l am in the Computer Club and we designed the programmes.
The children practised every day after school.
1 G9 _. Z8 O& {Then, on Tuesday, 5th May, the dress rehearsal started at 4 o'clock.
% Z6 J. _! J) u4 D+ H3 H! o2 vJo was one of the pirates.
: }3 z0 r: z& a6 ~Then on his left. (<-- ???)
Jack was very good in the band.
8 j; I% f8 r) Q. S2 _We all listened to the music and watched the scenes of different musicals.
At the end of the rehearsal we were all very happy.
9 l% S; O9 ?# n! c% RWe are ready for the show tomorrow.
Do you have shows in your school in New York?
" s% T  l+ v8 @4 J: jTell me about them.

5 @2 i' c! ~  p& U% WLove, Jack

jack99

Danke!

itsfun

Sping Show or Spring Show?

jack99

Dear Jay,
( w7 H' {. C$ y/ i0 u$ ZThe rehearsal dress  for our Sping Show was great!
& k6 @! Y# ~: w8 _% Z- ~All the children were very nervous.
, Z) T* R, E/ F6 Y$ G ...
9 p* _% Z! N0 c& |- x$ ^! Vkiro 发表于 2010-5-7 22:29

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    Vielen Dank!

jack99

British English, I assume?
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: p2 s: ~2 S5 C" tDear Jay,
The dress rehearsal for our Sping Show was great!
All the  ...
大脸MM 发表于 2010-5-8 08:31

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' `' S. H. l0 L    Vielen Dank!

jack99

Sping Show or Spring Show?
itsfun 发表于 2010-5-8 12:19

  m. T( _# w2 K! d5 b    Spring Show
    Danke!